SVP JUSTE POUR L'ORTHOGRAPHE , bonjour je doit faire une rédaction en Anglais , mais j'avoue que j'ai de gros problème en Anglais écrit , pouvez-vous me dire si
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SVP JUSTE POUR L'ORTHOGRAPHE , bonjour je doit faire une rédaction en Anglais , mais j'avoue que j'ai de gros problème en Anglais écrit , pouvez-vous me dire si les verbes sont bien conjugués ( la je parle au passé je raconte une histoire qui c'est passer pendant les vacance ) ou si c'est le bon orthographe et si mon texte tiens la route . merci d'avance :
- dear Andréa
Do you remember that i told you i wanted to find a job during the holidays ?
And well , i found a hairdresser job in the movie business .
It was wonderful , i had a lot of fun .
Moreover , i worked twenty hours a week and the salary was ten euros an hours .
The first time , i was afraid to make a stupidity , and i was impressed by stars and comedians .
But they were very nice and they complimented on my work .
I was very happy to work with TV stars .
I'am very Proud of myself because i style the hair of the stars that turned into a horror movie and i know you love horror movies i can see all the scenery and walk in the middle .
i've seen almost ghosts .
I would have wanted you to see it .
Finally , now i have to prepare myself to go back to school i still had fun .
I wait for you to tell me your holidays write me soon .
lots of love .
Cheers .
- dear Andréa
Do you remember that i told you i wanted to find a job during the holidays ?
And well , i found a hairdresser job in the movie business .
It was wonderful , i had a lot of fun .
Moreover , i worked twenty hours a week and the salary was ten euros an hours .
The first time , i was afraid to make a stupidity , and i was impressed by stars and comedians .
But they were very nice and they complimented on my work .
I was very happy to work with TV stars .
I'am very Proud of myself because i style the hair of the stars that turned into a horror movie and i know you love horror movies i can see all the scenery and walk in the middle .
i've seen almost ghosts .
I would have wanted you to see it .
Finally , now i have to prepare myself to go back to school i still had fun .
I wait for you to tell me your holidays write me soon .
lots of love .
Cheers .
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1. Réponse MathieuM
Do you remember that I told you I wanted to find a job during the holidays? And well , i found a hairdresser position in the movie industry . It was so wonderful that I had a lot of fun . Moreover , I worked twenty hours a week and the salary was ten euros an hour . The first time , i was afraid of making a stupid thing , and i was impressed by celebrities and actors. But they were very nice and they complimented me on my work . I was very happy to work with TV celebrities .
I'm very proud of myself because i style the hair of the actors that played in horror movies and i know you love horror movies i can see all the scenes and walk in the middle . i've seen almost ghosts . I would have wanted you to see it . Finally , now i have to prepare myself to go back to school i still had fun . I wait for you to tell me your holidays. Write to me soon . lots of love . Cheers .