Bonjour, demain je j'ai un contrôle d'anglais et je dois faire une critique sur une bande d'annonce d'on je ne connais pas. Pourriez-vous me dire comment faire

Je te donne des exemples de phrase que tu peux utiliser:
" I think it would be better if … "
" I don’t really like … "
" I would prefer it to be … "
" I am not sure this is a good way to express … "
" Maybe If It was … It would have been better "
" This doesn’t express any good contents "
" I suggest that this article should be shown somewhere else "